The Matrix Resurrections

 The Matrix Resurrections

A Review in Writing (Spoilers so please be warned)

So, where to begin with this one. There was a lot of high expectations coming off of the back of two things, time, and ability. 

For those that remember sitting in the cinema, watching the first matrix unfold through a gritty green lens. This outing held a lot of promise for the veterans of the series. Now before we get started, this is going to be a review in writing. By this I mean, given all of the material, and all of the places that this movie could have gone. Where did the writing takes us. 

So lets just throw it out there, from the supporting roles and old characters brought back for nothing but dialog or pointless monologues. To the plain fact that everything scene felt like a studio set, or at best, the inside of a Starbucks coffee shop. This may have been deliberate, the opening sequence out side the heart of the city, which felt faker than fake. Lets just call it. Resurrections is a bad movie. Which is criminal because it had all of the potential to be great. I am not just talking about leaning into nostalgia. it had time on its side, and an audience that would have been receptive to a movie come back. even the stars were on board. However, whilst we talk about that side of things, where was the original two blatant missing leads. Replacing Morpheus and Smith, was just pure pointless. They were staple DNA of the franchise, so either bring them back or remove them all together. A half way house just added to the dilution of the issue with this movie. 

From the opening dialog between the two observers it was clear that spoon feeding was on the cards. Have we really reached that point in todays society where if it is not obvious then people will just not get it. This seems to be a reoccurring theme. Here, look at this. To stop the masses saying 'I don't get it'. 

Fight scenes felt fake and at best bad. There are several points where punches are mistimed and where CGI was needed, the film opted for live action. Why, the whole point of the Matrix is to be impossible. So lean into it, embrace it, but just not to the extent they did in Matrix Reloaded. 

One of my pet hates with the original two movies was the move away form the Matrix itself. In episodes 2&3, humanity and those still help captive diverged to a point where Neo just did not get enough exposure to what he once was a part of. Here again, we see the same mistake all over again. 

To sum it up, 'Look my life is weird. I find out I am special. I discover a new world. I fight for my old world, but I never connect with it again.'

Neil Patrick Harris, puts in a good performance, but when compared to the original Smith character or even the architect it falls short. 

The Merovingian was great to see, and then launches into nothing but a pointless monologue over the top of a dead and lifeless fight scene. During which we see Neo and Smith fight, flatly and without any emotion or indeed danger for what loss would mean to the story line. 

There are so many more fulfilling directions this movie could have gone. So many paths that would have echoed what we all wanted and pulled on the nostalgia heart stings in a more rewarding way. 

My personal problem with the movie in general, the direction felt flat. Staged to a point where I just did not care for it. The fight seems were weak and just sloppy in places. The writing on dialog was bad. Yep, called it. Take a look at the first 10 minutes, speaks volumes. The cast did a good job with what they had but those first 10 minutes shows you how the rest of the movie is going to pan out. 

Finally, never trust a movie with so many flash backs, rewinds, and loops. Editing could have brought the movie down by at least 20 minutes shorter on the runtime, and made it punchier for the viewer. 

Now that I feel I have gone too far into the bad, lets talk about the good. Trinity and Neo are good enjoyable characters to invest in, but their story had been told. Their sacrifice had been made. 

I would have loved to see the Matrix opening sequence return. Streams of data, perhaps showing each of the instance building up then falling down. Maybe even early, machine code building up after the end of the great war. This would have been great from a time dilated point of view culminating in each pervious version of Neo and their events leading to the reset of the Matrix. I know its not easy but not everything needs to be obvious. It played out like a bad book, telling me what to look at and think. I think it was maybe 5 mins in where the two observing characters to Trin's loop call it for what is exactly is. Why? 

Anyway, enough is enough. There is too much to talk about here, and so much that could have been great. I am sure it will get its moment as a movie. People will either love it or hate it, as always with films that are sugar and salt. 

I will leave the comment field open, so tell me what you think. Good or bad, what were you thoughts.

31-27

42 - 15 = 27

Twenty-seven years of storytelling.
Twenty-seven years of getting the timelines right.
Twenty-seven years of ordering the chaos in my head.
Twenty-seven years of manuscripts.
Twenty-seven years of finding a new keyboard, a new notebook, a new way of recording the madness in my head. 
Twenty-seven books all set in the same scape.

31-27 = 4

Four years left to go.
Four more books before it is all done.
Four more times.

Book 2 - Too much info (Problem Statement)

So, this is another one of those blogs where I discuss my writing issues in the attempt to shed some light on my writing process, with the slim chance that someone might find it helpful.

Question: Where do you go when you have the whole story mapped out on paper, and in your head, but you cannot seem to get started on the keyboard?
 
To put this into context, book one of #T2B landed at around 120k words. It took around 3 months of actual writing time. OK, so around a year in total, but to be honest, I only took approximately 9-12 weeks to get the first draft out. Another month to get the edit through the team.

So what's the problem I hear you yell?

Well, the problem is simple. When you land a good story, sink all your efforts into a great (well I think it's excellent) plot. You want to make sure it keeps flowing, keeps moving forward. 

There are many problems which come with writing a sequel.

• You can fracture too quickly.
• You can deviate from the characters original core.
• You can spin in all the wrong directions with characters that your readers have come to love, and fear.

So you have to be careful. You cannot betray the trust you have built up with the reader.

So where do I find myself? 

• I cannot just cut the same story, and send it out with the #2 on the front. 
• This is too dangerous, although the reader will be safe in the knowledge that they will be up for mark 2, you as a writer will be following the same old motion. 

This is not a good place to be. 

Five in Five

Book two is going well, so just as I was gearing up to punch into act two, I received a challenge to undertake the following. 

Five stories in five days. They are ranging from two thousand words all the way to five thousand. Yes, the writing competition season is upon us. So my editor and longtime writing buddy wants a backlog for possible submissions. 

That said, he also does not want me to take my foot of book two. So, with all that in mind. Here we go.

Five stories, five days. #5in5Writing

For those that have read my blog before or for that matter my twitter feed. Will know that sleep, or my lack of it, has enabled me to generate ideas pretty quickly and abundantly.

So let's put that statement to the test shall we, and see if we can produce five fully formed short stories in just five days. The genre's and size will be set by the other half of the Richards&Howell101 team. 

Check back to see how we are getting on. The official start date will be Monday the 4th, for those that want to join us. Please feel free to drop me a line, and we can do it together.

Book Two

There are so many times in life when as a writer you sit and stare at a blank screen and wonder why. So why bother.

It's writing advice time, yet again.

Having put the last word to a 100K+ project, it was a little daunting when the other half of the writing team said. 'Let's do another.'

I was not quite sure whether or not I should laugh, get excited or hang my head in desperation. I'm sure you've all felt this way, you get to the end of a substantial project, only to realise its not really the end. There more to come, and your proofreaders want it now.

So, good feedback aside. That pressure of people wanting more is good, right? You've created colourful characters that people care about, have invested in, and desperately want to read more of.

Yet when the time comes, and you sit there in front of that huge screen of white nothingness. We find ourselves doubting. The usual questions come to mind, list time:

• What happens if I mess it up?
• Should I kill off a main character?
• Should I take it in a different direction?
• What happens if I go too far?
• ,,,
• ..

You know what I mean, the list expands. Before you know it you are doing more procrastinating but not in a good way. This is in self-doubt, too nervous to start, too worried to end.

So how do I get over it? Well the above counts for all of us. I would loop back to my default here, and remind everyone that I do not sleep. Which always comes in handy when you need to write to a deadline. Yet I can offer a bit of advice.

Leave the PC alone, step away from the keyboard. Grab a notebook and a pen. Yes, a good old paper writing session. Firstly it takes longer to write longhand, your brain can often work quicker then you can scribble. This is the opposite to when you type, when you feel that words are flowing 1:1.

So the first bit of advice is, grab a pen and slow down a bit. Take time to plot, and to think. it can really help.

The second bit of advice is this. Take pride in the pen. Yes, love that notebook. Rinse and repeat. Keep coming back to the one book. Build it over the years, full of anything and everything. The next time you get stuck, flip it open and read some of your past entries. You'll be surprised how a blank spell can be unstuck by your past version of yourself.

So do future you a favour and keep scribbling, even when you are prolific.

Anyway, I hope this helps somebody, somewhere.

For me and the rest of the team (you know who you are). It's onto book two. The notebook method really worked this time, a little too much I might add. Yet it served its purpose until next time its needed.

It's done. To the year (well almost)

So after a litle over 12 months, the book is almost done.

It's been a voyage of discovery as this is the first time I have written with a partner. primarily for editing but it has been great to sound ideas off of another person during the authoring process.

So the book is standing at just over 100 thousand words. Cut down from the 140k that it was originally, but I feel it makes for a better novel.

So, one more pass and then its off to the agents we go. It's an exciting time for us, and fingers crossed there is lots more in the tank.

I've said it before, but writing is not the issue. The editing, having to deal with people is. Hey, each to their own talents though.

Thanks for reading and check back soon for more updates on where we are with the publishing process, the good and the bad of it all.

How Far Is Too Far?

Well, it has been a very long and challenging week but I am here now, back in front of the keyboard and that is what counts.

So, what am I up to today? Hammering out the next chapter, chapter 29 & 30. So a few things to talk about tonight. Firstly by my calculations, I am around 30k away from finishing. This is good but leaves me with another exciting issue.

• What issue, I hear you ask.
• Well, what do I do next?
• Rinse and repeat or move onto something new and improved?

So what do I mean by rinse and repeat?

Well, that is an excellent question. Firstly, do I keep repeating the draft process or just rinse off the required number of words ready for submission then worry about the rest later?

How many times do you go through the draft process before you submit? Again, this is another excellent question, and honestly, one that I cannot answer for you. I guess you know when you know. Sometimes it's good to get it out there, and other times it's good to take more time and slow it down. Polish every word before you submit, because you only get one chance to make the right first impression.

What do I do next?

In this instance, I have left the judgement up to the editing team. They have grand plans and want to try different approaches to the submission process. Whatever that means! From the novel, to screen and graphic art. They have big plans, but as I have said in previous blogs both here and on the website. I am full of ideas, the latter stages of the process bog me down when in all honesty, I just want to keep on writing.

So what to next? I have plans. 31 of them in total. Yes, you read that correctly, not 1 but 31 new works in the pipeline. So please check back from time to time, once the first one is picked up I will be able to provide you more detail as the 'cat will be out of the bag' by then.

Rinse and repeat or move onto something new and improved?

I refer to this a few times. Rinse and repeat, by this I mean more science fiction and fantasy or something new and entirely different to my writing style. My head is hankering for the latter, but something tells me I need to do some more of the first to get through the backlog. Either way, there will be words on a page, and that is all that matters.

So, after nearly a year my latest work is almost complete, there's just the little matter of a few characters to sort out (no spoilers), and the inevitable 'The End' to be written.

So what have a learnt from this writing journey then?

Quite a lot, a year is a little bit of a stretch in writing time. Most of the bulk of the chapters have been written in the past two months. Out of a thirty chapter novel, the last twelve were written in fast succession. What this tells me is that I can be, when correctly motivated, focused to achieve a lot in a short period of time. Writing in bulk also helps with my continuity and integration into character depth. Writing with long breaks or in short bursts, I have noticed that there is a tendency to waver or drift.

Working with an editor on a daily basis has been a lot of fun too. Challenging at times, but I have looked upon the opportunity as a welcomed experience and not one to be passed over in the future. It also served to drive me forwards, knowing that there was a person there, waiting for your pages, on a daily basis gave you added time pressure. It was not only a matter of time though, it felt like I was writing for them or to them, so there was the aspect of direct feedback. This stopped me from rabbit holing too much too long and we could rectify plot issues as they unfolded instead of at the end when rewriting could be more detrimental.

Have I finished yet?

No, and this is the problem. Those plots and planning steps that we all know and love. Those notes for what will come next that we have all written in margins of notebooks and new file documents. Well, let's just say that this time there has been a problem.

It's comical when I come to think about it, but here goes. I intended to end the book in a certain way, and with certain people. The problem that has come to light is this, the book had other ideas, and now I have taken the final act in an entirely different direction. The strange thing to contemplate is that they are my words, written or typed by my hand, and yet here we are in a entirely different endgame than what I first expected.

The more I read it, the more it makes logical sense, given character progression and the natural order of how things would pan out for both the reader and the storyteller. That does not quash the niggle though, that little itch that keeps telling me to go back three chapters are reworked it all to make the ending what I originally intended. Tough choices need to be made, so here we go.

I have decided to end the book as is, to let the logical choice flow and stop.

I will then do what my brain is telling me to do and go back twenty thousand words and rewrite the end game to make it what it was supposed to be. I will then let the editor or you the reader decide how you want it to end in good old fashion adventure style. The book will either be published with both endings or one, and the alternative will be on the website for you to contemplate. Let's call it my nod to the red/green books (hidden meaning).

The end is in sight, but wait, what's that red light.

Chapter 27 - Locked and Loaded

So, another one had been dropped into the editor's inbox. After a bit of a flourish, I now have time to blog again. Its been a few weeks since I last posted, so what's been going on?

Work, writing, and learning the piano all over again. All the usual stuff to keep me occupied.

Focusing on writing though, I am now 27 chapters in on the latest project. It has been running since the middle of 2017 and is at around the 140k mark as we speak today. With editing, it has notched up to a little higher.

The book is very close to completion, of the first draft that is. Once completed and the editor has caught up with the backlog. A subtle nudge there is you are reading. Then it will be recut, shut and pushing it out to the agents.

The story is part one of a potential two book series although the material is expansive and lots could be expanded upon. Part of me wants to wrap it all up into one book, but you know how editors get. Always looking for a series where they can.

Borrow are respin (#writingadvice) : One of the reasons this project has moved along so quickly is because I borrowed a couple of well-formed characters from a previously unpublished work. Never start from scratch, especially when you have some characters that are complete and, excuse the pun, sitting on the shelf.

Anyway, a short blog today. Keep on writing, it's no good having stories in your head. Get them down on paper (or virtual).

I am currently predicting that the project will be complete sometime in May. So many more to start and complete though, but I am looking forward to beginning another joint project. This one has driven me to write more, faster with the knowledge that there is a support network to keep me focused.

Writer (me), editor (Mr S) and a screenwriter (Still to be confirmed).

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Writers Software Choices

One pet hate is when you pay good money for software you need to help save time and it does the complete opposite. This is frustrating to say the least. Our times as writers is precious especially when writing is not our full time role. Therefore to be facing issues with software, the one thing that allows us to put things onto paper quicker can lead to anger. 

Over the years and during writing the books in my catalogue of work, I have used many different hardware and software devices to put my thoughts down. Some have been good, whilst some have been extremely detrimental to that creative process. 

The important thing to remember before reading on is that what works for one person will not necessarily work for another. The approach that I take will not be the same as yours or should it be. The intent here is to show the development process and some of the struggles I have faced over the course of the years I have been behind a keyboard.

With that in mind what I am about to tell you probably gives you and indication of how long I have been writing. So my first device was an Amstrad 464 which shipped with a tape drive and a free word processor called Easi-AmsWord. This to date is still the best word processor I have every used, which may come as a surprise to many of you considering how basic it was but here are my reasons why.

• No spell checker. Yes that's right. It shipped as is so a dictionary was vital to ensuring you made no mistakes. At the time I had and used a thesaurus which was a trusted tool.
• Max file size. The 464 would only allow you to write so many lines before it would be unable to store any more into temp memory. This meant that you would only ever be able to write ~ 2-5 pages before backing up and moving on. This allowed for a very focused way of writing. There was no ability to go back to a previous chapter or side two different chapters side by side.
• Time to load. It took around 2-3 minutes to load up the word processor then further time to find the file you were working on and load that via the tape drive. All of this meant that once you were ready to start working you were in the zone. Today's ability to flick on and off is good but often allows for personal procrastination.
• The keyboard, oh my word the keyboard was insanely good. The right height the right depth of key for speed writing. It was a dream. Whilst we are on keyboard.

Keyboards:

So keyboards, yes this is my personal addiction. As stated above my 464 had to date my favourite keyboard. It's important to note the to date part of the previous statement. As I am always on the hunt for new ones. My second favourite keyboard is an old IMB model M. Folding spring model but this is too loud at night and keeps most of the neighbourhood awake whilst I am working.

I am currently writing this on a surface keyboard which is very good but still lacks the physical connection to a key press that earlier, sturdy keyboards provide. The recent revival of mechanical keyboards have gone a long way in reviving that experience but with a modern take. Keyboards loaded with Cherry MX or ML keys are good and allow for a very tactile experience when I am writing. The surface keyboard and its folding equivalent allow for lots of high speed word bashing without suffering the wrath of the family shouting at me for interrupting their sleep.

Back to software:

So through the years and with faster devices being made available for cheaper prices the king of the word processor dominated my writing path. Yes I am talking about Word. Love it or hate it you cannot deny that it does exactly what its supposed to do and it does it well. There are too many pros and cons for this one and over the years even MS have listened to their users to reduce some of the later whilst maintaining the for.

I have to be honest here and say that Word has been and will be my fall back tool for years to come. With the bulk of my back catalogue still sitting in .doc format.

Passing word by I moved onto Scrivener for a few years. Again this is a good tool and helped me to start writing again at speed but it also hindered it quite substantially too. Lot's of people love it but after two books I felt we had to depart ways. The process of writing seemed too complicated and if anything a word processor just like a pen is a tool to help and not hinder.

My departure with the above led to a bit of a word processing crisis for me. Do I return to the old ways and use word. Look even further back to the word perfects or push onwards to the Google equivalents.

After dabbling with a bit of nostalgia I decided to move forwards and I am now heavily seated in gdocs. Not perfect but it does allow me to collaborate at speed with my editor and other writers. Simple in nature, a hark back to the very fundamentals of what a word processor should be and for that I am happy.

The biggest single advantage however is cloud computing. An always up approach to writing, any device and connection anywhere. This is where the power in my current choice resides.

I hope this blog was of interest to you. Please remember though. What works for you is the most important choice to make. Be in Mac or PC. MS or Google. Bespoke or generic. Seek out what makes your writing sessions a success. The end of the journey is always the same, a book. The process or getting there can be infinitely different. From paper and pen to computer. Go make your choice but never be afraid to explore and seek out other peoples advice. You never know it might make you sessions more enjoyable.

Long Week: Positive Outcome

Well that was a very long week. Which unfortunately meant that I was unable to join the #5amwritersclub.

Work can be one of those distractions that aids my writing or hinders it. It all depends on the pressure. Let me explain. 

Some days work can be full on 100 mph and 12-14 hour days. When the pressure is so high it can often help to spur my writing on. As long as I can protect that 1 hour slot at 5AM. 

When work is everything and all consuming it can however impact my writing and not just by the fact that I run out of time. It can put my creativity on a negative slant. Where I rush my sessions, looking for work count over content because time is so short. 

Linking back to some of my previous posts, ensure you have the ability to notice the warning sides of this second effect. With my current work 'Top to Bottom: Working Title' the editor is keeping a mindful eye on these tell-tales. When I am working on my own the first edit is usually when I pick it up and this can often be too late. 

Today's point to take away is this: never write because you have to. Never force words because you think you need to. 

Free stuff on Amazon

Well, I almost forgot I had this one published but here it is on a free promotion for all of those people who want something fun to read.

It's short but sweet full of action and magical nonsense but I am still proud of it all the same. A total departure from my usual content.

Go check it out. Hal's Tale: https://www.amazon.co.uk/Hals-Tale-Lee-Thomas-Richards-ebook/dp/B007TNWND8

The reason this little book came into life was quite simple. My eldest asked me to write her a book for her birthday. Time was short and with less than three weeks to pull it together, Hal's Tale was born.

It's a good example of how time pressure can work for you and against you. Lot's of words and OK plot, some great scenes and not a lot of editing. The last point is the reason why I have not pulled it down and reworked it, even now after all this time. It serves as a reminder of measure twice and cut once rule but when faced with the time I had and the request of a daughter something had to give. So, this book shows what can be achieved in twenty one days if you sacrificing the second and third rewrites.

One day I will go back and rework the whole thing as this version is the 'Short' version. There is a 'Longer' version kicking about in the cloud somewhere but other projects keep getting in the way.

Anyway, go read if you have the time and let me know what you think. Like or dislike all feedback, when constructive, is useful.

Thanks again for reading the blog. LT.

Chapter 22 - (Four Tips For Today)

Chapter 22 - Not making the rapid progress that I would like. 

Forcing writing is never a good idea but there are tricks you can play to over come those little writing blues we all suffer from now and again. 

In no particular order here are some of my own personal self help tips to get the thread flowing again. 

• Turn the radio / TV on or open a newspaper / magazine. Read or listen to two lines or sentences. Mash two different sources together. Write a paragraph using those subjects within your own story. This can work really well to add back story or sub plots into an area where you are struggling to progress. Sometimes straight through is not always the only answer, sometimes going around can be just as good. This trick I learnt on a creative writing course, many moons ago but it still works for me. 
• Alter your surroundings but do no procrastinate. A change is as good as a... Yep that old chestnut but this works for me too. Change where you are working, alter you outlook. Go look out of a different window. Sit in a Café, listen to other people talking but not in a scary way. Also, exercise, go for a walk or play a game anything to pull you away from what you actually are stuck on. 
• Music, yes this one works really well for me too. In short when I write I often imagine the story in music most likely because I am always writing to music. So it naturally becomes the soundtrack for the final novel. To the point where if I hear a piece of music it will link me to the chapter or the plot I was working on at the time it was added. This trick can help pull you back into the frame and mind set of wiring again. 
• Chat to your editor, this is the replay trick. Talk to the person who is working of the last few chapters you wrote. It's amazing what information you can gleam from this experience. How they expect the book to progress based on the work they have recently edited. You can almost use them as a metronome, a simple beat beat to keep you on track. This last one is a new one for me as this is the first book I have written with an editor on board from the beginning. Note, this could be anyone not just an editor but bouncing ideas off people is always handy.

Just four tips for today because you may have guess I am blogging and not writing, so maybe four tips but this one could fit into option two. 

Well hopefully this was of some use to anyone who take the time to read it. Please let me know if it was either through the website or via twitter, twitter is where I am most active at the moment. 

• If all of this fails the go for the nuclear option and kill off a main character. Only kidding don't do this. This is bad.

Update: So a quick writing session with my eldest was all it took. The eyes of a child is an amazing thing. The ideas they can come up, instantly and without preconception of what is good an bad is truly amazing.

So with all of that in mind, I am back on it. Hammering the keys, well not too had as I'm not totally sure that this keyboard would take it.

Chapter 22 - Writers block

So, lots going on here today.

It is officially my last day of a two week break where the main subject matter was:

1. Spend quality time with the family
2. Spend time making the dog a normal pet and not the muppet he is (puppies)
3. Write
4. Write
5. Game in VR
6. Game in D3

Tick box in all of them, apart from 2 where I swear the dog is being a muppet on purpose just to wind me up.

So back to points 3&4, as some of you may be aware I have been working on a new book with an editor. Yes you read that correctly, an editor. 

A simple project with big promise and as I have already stated in previous posts the editor has both been a blessing and a curse.

• A blessing - Allows me to write at full pace without really having to do any one the fly edits.
• A curse - Always chasing me to produce more, faster, quicker.

The second part is not really and issue as I can write under pressure and usually this is when I produce my best stuff. The first part is a blessing as I feel unhindered by the fact I can just brain dump the story at the speed I can hit the keys.

Like many writers though, the end nigh. We are almost there, another book ready to put on the shelf. However with this one, the plan is slightly different. I have turned over the task of seeking publication to the editor. Yes, delegation is awesome.

Chapter Eighteeen...Chapter 19...no wait 20...wait what...

[Written sometime ago]

So here we are chapter eighteen. Two more to go and then the end will be upon yet another book. One more for the shelf, another set of dreams and nightmares commited to paper.

So now that is out of the way. Interestingly like I always seem to do I was heading for the end. The decision had been made. Chapter eighteen was going to be the crest of the wave that allowed me to start wrapping things up. So where's the but, well here it is.

After starting eighteen 'the altogether' for those that end up reading it in the future or if you find this blog retrospectively it will make sense. Eighteen was going well, all nicely flowing and then I had another thought 'the what if'.

So eighteen suddenly became twenty one and now I am back to adding yet more twists and turns to an already convoluted plot line. I think I still have handles on all the strings but it is getting pretty crowded now. This will all make sense when you read it but the point here is to build to a moment where everyone in the book is thrown together. You the read know how each character came to be in that place and at that time.

It's still going well, progressing nicely through the word count that we writers live and die by. The good session and the bad counter. Yet part of me is looking forward to getting to the end now. What started out as a short story premise has grown and grown to the point where it is now its only animal. There is nothing wrong with this but it is a little daunting to think that it all has to come off in the end and have I led you all to the point where it is going to payoff.

[Written 03/04/2018]

So, here's the really interesting thing. Twenty one got bumped to twenty two and even more sub plots and main narrative has been added. 

It's amazing what two weeks off work will do to for you writing. When work is not the distraction that it always tends to be, lets be honest here it has to be because it pays the bills. 

I was looking back at some of my early stories, early works still unedited and unpublished and it made me think long and hard about how to get them onto the shelf. I think this is why I finally bit the bullet and excepted help in the form of my current editor. It really is refreshing to think that as fast as I can write it he can edit it. The more I put to page, the better the chance is of us getting out there in a more structured fashion.

After all, we write to be read. What's the point in having it static on a hard drive where no one else can see it. For all its good and its bad points.